Monday, 23 March 2015

A Hole In The Rock

The wind was howling around me but I could faintly hear the sound of the exotic seabirds below. The waves were breaking as they hit the deadly rocks. I stopped for a moment to catch my breath and in front of me I could see the blue horizon with a cloudy infinite sky above. I noticed a tiny sailboat way out in the ocean. My hand grabbed a slippery, sharp rock and I cringed in pain. I wonder what the reward is on this life changing experience.
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  1. Anonymous23 March 2015 at 14:28

    I really like the adjectives I used.
    I like how I set the scene.

    I could've wrote more.

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  2. Anonymous30 March 2015 at 13:24

    I like how you said I could faintly hear the sound of exotic seabirds below
    I can see how the picture you make looks you are very good at describing
    but I would like to hear more about it !

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